Lazing on a sunny Sunday,
not waiting for the phone to ring,
wearing a glut of contentment,
]]paused[[
on the undersprung couch,
and the tigress sleeps beside me,
twitching with dreams.
Lazing on a sunny Sunday,
not waiting for the phone to ring,
wearing a glut of contentment,
]]paused[[
on the undersprung couch,
and the tigress sleeps beside me,
twitching with dreams.
Perfect Sunday. Put yourself back together Monday. Like this very much.
Lovely post, that is completelly what I did and how I felt today. What else can I ask for?
This feels like quite a departure from your style. Dare I say it? It reads like a pair of Haiku’s in hiding!!!! Wonderful 🙂
Cal – I tucked the tiger back where she belongs. 🙂
Mariana – we can ask for nothing else. It is sheer bliss, thank you 🙂
Brad – Thanks for the wonderful. 🙂
Lovely – Sunday is a beautiful day of the week
… the tempo of your words is delicious.
Thank you Tracey 🙂 Delicious is a fantastic compliment!
If chocolate is a comfort food then this is definitely a comfort poem! 🙂
It is Val… and I tucked that tigress back in me for the start of the new week like Cal suggested. Everyone deserves a Sunday off.
oh my! i have just found a new fave!!! i LOVE ur style! phenomenal!
http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/2010/09/27/on-a-bed-of-winter/
the tigress twitching beside you is hilarious haha! thanks for sharing! here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
I LOVE this! undersprung couch is brilliant!!
Thank you – I’m not quite sure how you all got here but I’m very pleased you liked 🙂
lovely humor..
keep rocking…
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Keep Writing, Happy 2011!
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Ahhhh now I see. No thanks Jingle – not my scene – but wishing you luck with your new venture.
Excellent. One of those “in-limbo” moments in life that are rarely captured effectively, because they are so elusive to document. Full of the essence and feeling of potential, things soon to happen. Sundays are often days that resist taking definite shape, and you’ve been wise enough not to give us too many answers. Brilliant.