I don’t think that a strange, male, married reader ought to comment on this intimate and sensual verse! Not even a regular reader. I’ll just say that you’ve drawn the heart very well!
This is an erotic teaser of a poem and so hot it could melt chocolate hearts. I love your idea to post a romantic poem a day in the spirit of number 14. 🙂
A poem a day for 14 days? Knowing how much you crave perfection that is a big ask. The first one here? Perfect. Hope it’s not all going to be so romantic…a good dose of cynacism to even it out?
Thank you everyone! Agh! I don’t know whether I can do this 14 day thing but I’ll give it my best shot. The next one might be a tinsy bit cynical – just for you, Cal. 🙂
Just wonderful … the structure and content are laced with intimacy … a perfect start to the Valentine’s series.
Thank you Tracey? I still remember your 12 days of Christmas (very) fondly, haha.
one of my favorites as you know, yet better …
Thank you Ana… I’m always so pleased when I see you’ve stopped by. 🙂
As I have read from 5 to 1 in that order I must say this is the poem I love most. Perhaps John it is only women who continue to feel the love and the energy of their partner even though they may be apart. Fantasy is a lovely thing.
that is beautiful, like a sweet and gentle love song, musical and magical
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I don’t think that a strange, male, married reader ought to comment on this intimate and sensual verse! Not even a regular reader. I’ll just say that you’ve drawn the heart very well!
This is an erotic teaser of a poem and so hot it could melt chocolate hearts. I love your idea to post a romantic poem a day in the spirit of number 14. 🙂
A poem a day for 14 days? Knowing how much you crave perfection that is a big ask. The first one here? Perfect. Hope it’s not all going to be so romantic…a good dose of cynacism to even it out?
Thank you everyone! Agh! I don’t know whether I can do this 14 day thing but I’ll give it my best shot. The next one might be a tinsy bit cynical – just for you, Cal. 🙂
Just wonderful … the structure and content are laced with intimacy … a perfect start to the Valentine’s series.
Thank you Tracey? I still remember your 12 days of Christmas (very) fondly, haha.
one of my favorites as you know, yet better …
Thank you Ana… I’m always so pleased when I see you’ve stopped by. 🙂
As I have read from 5 to 1 in that order I must say this is the poem I love most. Perhaps John it is only women who continue to feel the love and the energy of their partner even though they may be apart. Fantasy is a lovely thing.
that is beautiful, like a sweet and gentle love song, musical and magical