6 thoughts on “Elicit

  1. Perfect, especially the last line.

    Thank you ford! Long time no see. I’ll head over in your direction this weekend. 🙂

  2. Right on Kizz y’leff nothin’ out!!
    That was my intention Donald… left me dizzy fitting it all in 🙂

  3. Really like this. Particularly was drawn to the idea of “an entanglement of calm fear”. Wonderful description of a complex feeling.
    Mimi (((((gorgeous lady))))). Thank you.

  4. To the climax and back with perfect poise… it has left me with a delicious image of an affair of two perfect halves facing inwards on their own secret. Mesmerising… I bet it sounds fantastic read to an audience!

  5. Intense, that feeling of passion is so beautifully drawn in words.
    a masterpiece, breathtaking.
    (i love the new header photo too)

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